Previous Student's Work - Evaluation

I found this particular student's evaluation answer extremely ineffective because although she is in fact answering every question, she is lacking detail and a variation of shots. The clip itself is very short and throughout each question she repeats the same layout. Other than the initial background music which is one soundtrack played through the whole clip, she hasn't recorded her own voice or shown any great amount of effort in producing her evaluation. Having said this, she does use a very professional styled background, and should she have included other images as well as this, I think the evaluation would have been much more effective. She answers that she has used YouTube to analyse and research, yet she fails to discuss why she has chosen this method in comparison to other research resources available. Overall I think this is a marginally poor evaluation.