To kickstart our evaluation, we each decided to answer one evaluatory question. We took into consideration every element of research and planning that went into our music video and what decisions we made that reflected the music industry as it stands. We have given in our first draft of the music video, ancillary texts and evaluation and have received feedback from our media teacher. Overall, we feel the evaluation has been a success with all of our questions not needing altering other than question 1 by Katie. Having said this, if we all work together to fix the errors in the question we are sure that we will make it as effective as the other questions. The feedback for the ancillary text was even more successful because there were merely a few minor alterations to be made such as:
-making the text bolder
-add more conventional aspects to the magazine advert
we are extremely pleased with all of the help we have received and we will now be working extremely hard to make the changes needed!
By Holly and Megan.
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